Hi, if any of you have the time can you please go ahead and review my website. Be as blunt as you want. victorsmobiledetailing.com
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checked main pagereal quik, have to run, but get rid of the word "guarantee" re wash and wax, not a good business word. Looks nice, not cluttered or amateurish main page!2018 Acura RLX Tech - Majestic Black Pearl
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Commenting as a consumer and not a detailer:
- scrap references to armor all. For example, interior UV protectant with non-greasy, matte finish.
- think a bit more about the multi wash minimum stuff. Maybe you can offer a 2 or 3 pack deal or something, and/or a minimum fee for onsite visits. You need to define some kind of travel radius I think.
- spa wax- rethink the "select your choice of cleaner wax or carnauba". TELL them what they get.
- rethink "bring back faded exterior trim". That opens a can of worms. Are you talking like Ultimate Black on plastic?
- car lovers wash - add premium wax to the title, maybe car lovers premium wash and wax. Too much info on contamination.
- about us - rethink. Also, you use the word I too much. When people think of a "Company", they don't think of "I", they think of "we".
You should be disliking me right about now, so I'm stopping; but I'm just trying to help.
Stephan2018 Acura RLX Tech - Majestic Black Pearl
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I absolutely love it. If I had to think of something to critique though: a lot of people aren't sitting at home spending hours on the internet anymore (in due plenty still are). Many are using smart phones and looking for information quickly. My point being, there's too many options to click on at a glance.
For example, Jim is not a car nut, but he really likes to keep his car clean. He usually goes to the local detailer near his work on his lunch break, but he hears about this mobile detail guy with good prices. He really doesn't know much about car care/products, but a google search brings him to you're website. He's driving to catch lunch trying to look at his phone. Ok, he sees a "services tab" -wash/wax, complete detail, individual services, paint correction....I just need my car washed and vacuumed...I guess "individual services"...next page pops up....oh I can't read that its too small on my phone, let me zoom in, oh no, that's not what I'm looking for, I guess I'll go back and click on wash/wax...oops I clicked on the gallery link, go back....ugh, wish the website was mobile friendly...ok I think this is the page I'm looking for...wow, a lot of options here...I don't have time for this, I'll just eat fast and stop by the detail shop near work again, maybe later.
Just an illustration that was made to me when I built my website by a marketing guy I hired. It spoke volumes to me, and if he hasn't have put it that way i wouldn't have rebuilt my website and I'm glad i did. (still am). Still have all if your services listed but maybe right on you're main page highlight in much larger print, or have a mobile compatible website, your basic services grin your lowest cheapest fastest, to your full detail. Put verbiage in there to please browse our services tab at the top of the page for a full listing of all services provided, but that way to the lazy guy, or the man-on-the-go, he had his information in his face quickly, and you just turned a click onto a call.
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The mobile website is right on point. I think the website is generated with an online wizard. There should be a way to make a mobile/tablet friendly website that gets routed to from the main site when portable devices are detected. I hand coded my IT site (work in progress) but its a single, simple site that works mobile, tablet, pc, etc. and auto-rotates and auto-fits when tablet or phone is rotated. No photos, etc. yet.
2018 Acura RLX Tech - Majestic Black Pearl
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Re: critique My Website and Pricing Please
Originally posted by Stephan View PostCommenting as a consumer and not a detailer:
- scrap references to armor all. For example, interior UV protectant with non-greasy, matte finish.
- think a bit more about the multi wash minimum stuff. Maybe you can offer a 2 or 3 pack deal or something, and/or a minimum fee for onsite visits. You need to define some kind of travel radius I think.
- spa wax- rethink the "select your choice of cleaner wax or carnauba". TELL them what they get.
- rethink "bring back faded exterior trim". That opens a can of worms. Are you talking like Ultimate Black on plastic?
- car lovers wash - add premium wax to the title, maybe car lovers premium wash and wax. Too much info on contamination.
- about us - rethink. Also, you use the word I too much. When people think of a "Company", they don't think of "I", they think of "we".
You should be disliking me right about now, so I'm stopping; but I'm just trying to help.
Stephan
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Re: critique My Website and Pricing Please
Originally posted by owendavidj View PostI absolutely love it. If I had to think of something to critique though: a lot of people aren't sitting at home spending hours on the internet anymore (in due plenty still are). Many are using smart phones and looking for information quickly. My point being, there's too many options to click on at a glance.
For example, Jim is not a car nut, but he really likes to keep his car clean. He usually goes to the local detailer near his work on his lunch break, but he hears about this mobile detail guy with good prices. He really doesn't know much about car care/products, but a google search brings him to you're website. He's driving to catch lunch trying to look at his phone. Ok, he sees a "services tab" -wash/wax, complete detail, individual services, paint correction....I just need my car washed and vacuumed...I guess "individual services"...next page pops up....oh I can't read that its too small on my phone, let me zoom in, oh no, that's not what I'm looking for, I guess I'll go back and click on wash/wax...oops I clicked on the gallery link, go back....ugh, wish the website was mobile friendly...ok I think this is the page I'm looking for...wow, a lot of options here...I don't have time for this, I'll just eat fast and stop by the detail shop near work again, maybe later.
Just an illustration that was made to me when I built my website by a marketing guy I hired. It spoke volumes to me, and if he hasn't have put it that way i wouldn't have rebuilt my website and I'm glad i did. (still am). Still have all if your services listed but maybe right on you're main page highlight in much larger print, or have a mobile compatible website, your basic services grin your lowest cheapest fastest, to your full detail. Put verbiage in there to please browse our services tab at the top of the page for a full listing of all services provided, but that way to the lazy guy, or the man-onon-the-go, he had his information in his face quickly, and you just turned a click onto a call.
Thanks Guys!
Victor
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